Wednesday, 30 October 2013

This is Easy! Redraft

So the only one of my poems I really want to change is the first one, This is Easy! I felt like the middle verse didn't flow like the rest, it didn't have the same message, so I changed that. I changed the last verse a little too, but that got me thinking that I could, with a little effort, make it sound really really creepy. This isn't that poem.


This is Easy
Hah! Yeah, I remember
Being there then.
So drunk it was shameful
One of the men.

I’ve made some mistakes.
Perhaps they’ve made me.
I’ll never lie about
What I have been.

This is my past
Which I shall not discard.
Is being true tricky?

It's not hard.

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